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Royal Training by Daniel-SG Royal Training by Daniel-SG
EDIT EDIT EDIT: Some very nice person did a fan dub! AWESOME! [link]
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EDIT EDIT: OH MY GOSH, OH MY GOSH, OVER 1000!? WOW!

Also, it's one Equestria Daily! :iconrarityishappyplz: [link]
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EDIT: Removed the speech bubble for Luna, since apparently she never spoke in Moonstuck (I admit, I've only seen the posts that float around the internet, rofl). So yeah. :)

Also, HOLY BALLS, over 700f favorites!? This is nuts, and I was just hoping for a little over 200! :iconraritywowplz:
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Shining Armor likes Disney films. Go figure. ;p
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Ugh, my back hurts. I've been sitting at my computer chair too long. Still, I promised a comic today, and you shall have it, or my name isn't Gary- bucking- Oak! Wait. What. :icontwilightcrazyderpplz:

So, channel surfing last Friday, and I saw that ABC Familyl was playing Mulan, and of course, I was there in a second. Don't you look at me like that, that movie is awesome! :nod:

I admit, don't remember many of the songs, but I do remember "Make a man out of you" (which is good) and then this idea came. I remember when I first came up with it, I screamed in my head "Genius! This is a work of genius!" and while I don't think it's a genius as I did, I still think it's funny enough. :D

Still could do a tad more editing (the text is kinda wonky at parts, and I'm sure there are lines and stuff to fix) but whatever, I'm tired. Maybe another day. Maybe. Probably not. :blahblah:

By the way, never read much of Moonstuck, but what I've read is funny enough, rofl. :)

MLP belongs to Hasbro. Moonstuck was made by Egophilliac. Made in GIMP. :iconforestgumpplz:
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(Preface: this is my first critique)

Bwahaha! First off, this was utterly hilarious. As a person who enjoys the disney films that I grew up with I still go back and listen to them to this day -I see what you're going for, and you certainly hit it.

I've always enjoyed this art style for these comics. So high marks for that.

Now, onto the critique part of this. I had to put lower marks in originality because; let's face it... This is an OLD joke and has been beaten to death. Now, that's not to say it's bad, but Team four star made a whole video parody of the song.

The placement and size of the second panel is really weird! I actually read the right bubble before the left at first because I just didn't see the left bubble due to the right bubble's ENORMOUS size! This might be fixed with simply bringing up the left bubble too, as it's in a far lower position in the panel.

But, that's it. Remember; it did make me laugh a lot. Never read moonstuck, but I had to read your description to learn *why* Luna was black and white.
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Lol Disneys' Mulan's Prince compared to Shining Armor (whilst singing the song used to help train the "SOME men". I say wonderful idea using that! Bringing out Luna was the best part, I say. Marvelous drawings and their expresions make me feel like Mulan's characters are ponified and I am sucked inside, watching them train and wonder! I now know why this was posted on Equestria Daily! And congrats on that, too, it must feel great to be recognized on your work that you put great effort into. Based on their well painted expressions, it is like I can feel their emotions. BRAVO BRAVO!!!
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:iconglitchyshadow137:
GlitchyShadow137 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I have to animate this.
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:iconfnaf-and-tf-collin:
Fnaf-and-tf-collin Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Student Digital Artist
HHHNGG
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:iconnyerguds:
Nyerguds Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015
Isn't "the dark side of the moon" just Nightmare Moon? =p
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:iconglitchyshadow137:
GlitchyShadow137 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Huh.
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:icon9king:
9king Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
bilarious!
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:iconlordofthememes:
Lordofthememes Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2014
LOL
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:icondawnthebarrel:
Dawnthebarrel Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
woona x3
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:icontheartist3711:
TheArtist3711 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I am dying of laughter! XD
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:iconsturmlion1:
Sturmlion1 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014
Military Budgets are meant to be used on useless junk.
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:iconmarzillao:
MARZillao Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014   Traditional Artist
LOL!!! Laughed way too hard!

Love the Mulan reference! LUNA!!!! 
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:iconaussiegriffin:
AussieGriffin Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Woona has defeated threats no one else could defeat alone (mostly) and is more willing to help than Blue Blood.
A.G.
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:iconthe-rainbron3:
the-rainbron3 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
(facehoof)
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:iconriverclanlover:
RiverClanLover Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
OH MY LUNA I COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING THEN I STOPPED AND THEN I LOOKED AT IT AGAIN AND NOW MY THROAT HURTS
Clapping Pony Icon - Princess Luna 
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Kingofthecouch Featured By Owner May 3, 2014
panel 3: dawwwwwwwwww
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:iconcrystalwolfahlpa50:
crystalwolfahlpa50 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
OMGG XD lolz!
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:iconsturmlion1:
Sturmlion1 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
Princess Luna is the best Pony of them all. Woona is the most adorable. Especially when she is kicking Discords ass.
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ThePenVsTheSword Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Student Writer
Love it!
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:iconprincessfluttrshy184:
Princessfluttrshy184 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Woona! :D
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:iconcreepypastajoe:
Creepypastajoe Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Student General Artist
nice picture :D (Big Grin) 
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:iconcifyra:
Cifyra Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What is a "man"?
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:icontheartist3711:
TheArtist3711 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is part of a song in Mulan.
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:iconcifyra:
Cifyra Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So the "man" Lyra speaks about all the time is from a place call Mulan?
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:icontheartist3711:
TheArtist3711 Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep. It is a song called "I will make a man out of you" in the Disney Movie Mulan.
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:iconcifyra:
Cifyra Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe one day I'll watch it, so I can see what the fuss with "mans" Lyra always make is about.
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TheArtist3711 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok. :3
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GeneralEagleEye Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
PHAHAHA! That was awesome xD
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:iconchibigeeklover:
chibigeeklover Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SISTER! SISTER! SHINING ARMOR IS BULLYING US!
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:iconmoesx88:
moesx88 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
I don't get it...Ashamed 
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:iconzelda-lover306:
Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2013
Have you never seen Mulan?
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:iconmoesx88:
moesx88 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Years ago, I only remember the most crucial parts..
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:iconzelda-lover306:
Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Well, this comic was making fun of one of the songs of the movie.... Well, maybe not so much making fun of as... ah, whats the word? Parodying it? No, that's the same thing, isn't it? Well, they where using it to make a joke, basically. Celestia is being sarcastic when she sees Shining Armor basically singing a song, in stead of training his troops.
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moesx88 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
That's right. that musical number was a montage of when the soldiers were trained...
It's kind of OOC for shining if you ask me...:| (Blank Stare) 
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Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
That's the idea. Its a joke.
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:iconmoesx88:
moesx88 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
But maybe, just maybe, a little too awkward.
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:iconzelda-lover306:
Zelda-Lover306 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
They can't all be winners...:shrug:
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:iconpinkiepiehime:
PinkiePieHime Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MOONSTUCK!*clicks start*
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:iconzonor98:
Zonor98 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
/watch?v=AddhPLsQhDc
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:icondjcadencefan09:
DJCadencefan09 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
BABY VERSION OF LUNA xD
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bluejay162 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
lol
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:iconknightr33:
knightr33 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013
I seen the enemy and it is......
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:iconkairoanyi:
KairoAnyi Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
MULAN REFERNCE
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:iconpyramidhead90:
PyramidHead90 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013
Luna?!  CELESTIA YOU CRUEL BITCH, WHAT DID YOU DO TO YOUR SISTER THIS TIME?!
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KairaAethericBeast Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Cute. X3 Very nice job with this scenery. :P
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:iconsweetpeac:
sweetpeaC Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
:iconprincesscadenceplz: (Facehoof) SHINIG ARMOUR!!!!!
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:icondaniel-sg:
Daniel-SG Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That Shining Armor! :iconohyouplz:
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sweetpeaC Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
indeed that is
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Renegade-Cone Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
now i have an urge to listen to that song.
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:icondaniel-sg:
Daniel-SG Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You should! It's good! :)
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:iconrenegade-cone:
Renegade-Cone Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
I have and it was!
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Chaoslady97 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Artist
Omg lol
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